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My wondering mind

My wondering mind

My wondering mind
My sainted souls
My trip to nowhere calls and calls
Telling me tales of wicked nights with beautiful women, beautiful souls
Of towering risks that no one see’s                                 Bathed in that bottle of excasty, bathed in that bottle of wine
that knows no limits, hears no mother’s warning calls in the deep dark night
Where tales end in terror cry’s,
Where tales end in drunken fights 
Where tales end in new life formed, so small yet that know one knows, least the pants that lay crumpled on the floor, which hours before where begging for more
More love
More loss
More more
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This poem was inspired by “Fish in the Sea’s”, poem Jump (Life mountain)

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The fish of the sea

Awesome poem! Sorry it took so long for me to respond GV! Working on poem in progress called more so I was interested to see the same structure in your write! I'm so touched that I impacted you in this way. Love the broken - blank verse the most. Cheers for the reference! TFOTS 

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Being Me

Great write!  What an inspiration Max's words were! x

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Garth Vader

Yiyan

Thank you for taking the time to correct this spelling error!! As I simply breezed over it! Yes Souls. Lol!

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The fish of the sea

Hi Garth, again I wanted to say I really was honoured by your work. I just wanted to say thank you so much. But I`m actually here to wish you happy holidays and new year! Peace and smiles to you my friend! Don`t stop writing. Kind regards, The Fish of the Sea.

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Garth Vader

Thanks 😊 
merry Christmas and new year right back at you.. belated🤪

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