Poem -

Natasha

Natasha

With curly hair to die forย 
And another girl to lie forย 
She took my heart and kept it
Not knowing what she was in for

She stomps her boots
She flips her hair
She makes it seemย 
Like she doesn't care

Like a fire in the night
To the whole room she shines her light
But only when they're watching
Because without them, nothing's right

I know she knows I know,
That she loves another girl so
Now I know I must detach
And I know that I must go

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Tony Taylor

Hi ALANA!!.... this is VERY cleverly presented........ masking the pain of 'break-up' with well crafted and succinctly touching phrasing ~

ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย  ~ "She stomps her boots
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย  She flips her hair
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย  She makes it seem..."

This is the kind of potent phrasing that makes for a VERY good read!!..... "Girls will be girls, and so will a lot of middle-aged men!" (smiles)........ALL STARS!!.... well done dear poet sister.... and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!........LOVE &ย ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?โœด?โค
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย 

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