New Year Song
Your tears I have tasted
When I kissed them away
Now I am heart broken
My life has gone astray
Bring back my smile
Bring back my smile
Take instead this pain
Life for me is vain
Bring back my smile
Was your scented presence
After a long shower
Or after a long day
The source of my power
Bring back my smile
Bring back my smile
Take instead this pain
Life for me is vain
Bring back my smile
Your sweet textured kisses
With those big slapping hugs
Mercy stored in your eyes
My answer to them thugs
What makes life vain
Is the again...no again...no again
So now my pain
Life's not the same
Bring back my smile
Bring back my smile
Take instead this pain
Life for me is vain
Bring back my smile
Now you are laid to rest
The Earth melts you away
Gone but not forgotten
In my memory, Stay!!!
Bring back my smile
Bring back my smile
Take instead this pain
Life for me is vain
Bring back my smile
My Life's perfect ending
You the story it tells
I'm glad you came along
Even if my grief swells
Bring back my smile
Bring back my smile
Take instead this pain
Life for me is vain
Bring back my smile
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Comments
Enjoyed this one Nathaniel, a lovely sentiment. Particularly liked the verses
A touching write! A vote from me :)
Just a tiny thing but just be careful of small typo errors that change how it reads!
thanks for a advice....it's true...i cant spell worth a dime...thanks for the vote...i will try my best to keep my typos current...but im the blind leading the blind in this one...smile...
I am extremely happy you found favor with those verses...and even more so that you shared your vote with me...please note...that what you have to say...takes me the extra miles...nj
No worries Nathenial, sometimes it isn't spelling errors, it might just be where someone's mishit a key on the board and it reads wrong. Small things, but for me always read and re-read your stuff just in case lol!! Never want to sound picky but if people notice mistakes on mine I would rather know:)
Rachael I took out hearten...and replaced it with heart broken...smile...you throw it...i will dunk it...smile...thanks pal...nj
Spot on Nathenial:)
Was the first line of this verse to be 'your' or am I reading it wrong? :)
yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss...smile...ooops...wow...wow...hmmmmmmmmmmm...oh my...giggling...nj
Rachael with one have over my mouth, the other waving at you...im tip toeing out the room...props my sister...nj
Sorry Nathenial, no more questions lol!! Spot on nice write :)
Ok...i will come out from under the table...lol...you are a blessing...i would much rather you say something to me...the your be proud out foolishly...however...i tremble for good reasons....thanks for being kind to a bushman...smile..Thank Rachael...nj
"then to be proud out foolishly"........................see what I mean....................ggrrrrrrrrrrrrr...oh my...ok ok...its mine...i will pick up my teeth...i need them for my smile...lol...Rachael...can I leave now???
smile...nj