Poem -
Newborn Nation
We are not children anymore
here now ready to settle the score
Standing together in formation
under the flag of a newborn nation
Born from the womb of revolution
labored beneath the chains of persecution
Ready to give, ready to die
forever fighting against the lie
Taking our destinies in our hands
never suppressed by commercial demands
Let us go bravely by both darkness and light
standing strong and for our freedoms fight
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Comments
This is a VERY succinct conveyance of our countries foundation..........beautifully delivered...........and aside from the very last line I am in TOTAL agreement my friend..........I believe that our nation will help lead us into the exploration of space which will help unify a single global government and lessen WAR on this planet......LOVE this Travis...........smiles.........T xx
Much thanks Tony, I edited and redid the last line. It began as a call for a new revolution, but after reading what you wrote I saw the mirror of american foundation and so I moved it towards that theme. Thank for the honest critique
WOW!!.....,.....GREAT writing is found in the rewriting.........proud of you brother......ttyl......T xx