Nightmares

Nightmares are dreadful things
They creep into subconscious minds
And tear at sanity's fragile strings
Turning our thoughts to things unkind
I was a teacher of children quite small
And loved the years I spent with them
But soon after leaving teaching, I recall
My bad nightmares started to brim
The sweet ones eyes began to glow
Within my fevered brain so fraught
Red demon light seemed to flow
From every eye that I had taught
Then even stranger thoughts assailed
As each child grew in size
It seemed to me their fingernails
From my body sought a prize
They gouged my eyes and ripped my skin
I could not seem to escape
Although I tried to stop the din
Alas it was too late
Another time a stranger dream
Came to me late one night
It was more dreadful than I had seen
It caused me a sinister fright
I was in my old frame school
Twenty-five students joined me there
But one small boy had broken a rule
And slipped a gun in on a dare
We teachers never checked the hooks
Where all the schoolbags were sorted
We thought them filled with pencils and books
No weapons had ever been reported
But in this dream, he took us hostage
Then brandished the gun about
He placed in front of us a blockage
So not one of us could get out
With all my heart I entreated him
To let one small child go
It seemed that even the room went dim
As he looked at us row by row
At last, he motioned with hands so small
That I should walk one child
Out the door and down the hall
Where children and parents reconciled
So one by one I went with each
Dear student held that day
Until they all had safely reached
And end to their great dismay
Then S.W.A.T. moved right in sync
And whisked that boy away
I never knew what to think
Because suddenly I was awake
I jumped up from my bed undone
And ran frightened with a scream
I grabbed a phone to cal 911
Before I realized it was only a dream
Nightmares can be ever so real
They'll make you do strange eerie things
Nightmares all my dreams seem to steal
I wish they all would just take wings

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This is fantastic Julie, a wonderful use of rhyme, and a haunting narrative.Â
Very well done and welcome to Cosmofunnel.Â
JohnÂ
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem "Nightmares".
Nightmares are horrid things...very unsettling. Thank heaven this was just a bad dream and not real.Â
A fabulous write, Julia x
Love dreams and sometimes nightmares because the alternative world is so.vivid with colour sound atmosphere and emotion and nightmares, all the more scary for that. Loved reading about yours ??
This is so intensely powerful and filled with the compelling energy of truth in its most raw state...….your experience comes shining through the fog and smoke of the wake created by evil intent......I can tell that you were a teacher because of the immaculate delivery of phrasing and thoughtful imagery created by your VERY well chosen words that make up their totality!!…...ALL STARS & PINNED!!…….Beautifully profound and Stunningly well presented poetic truth!!……..and even though the very nature of dreams is to morph....you have found solid ground upon which to stand & deliver!!…...Very well conceived and Beautifully Delivered!!…...well done...….Bravo dear poet sister!!…….LOVE & ROCKETS!!…….T xo : )
PS. WELCOME to COSMO my friend!!
Thank you for your vivid compliment on my poem "Nightmares". I don't think I've ever gotten such a nice comment on any poem I've posted anywhere online. I looked up things about you and you are a very interesting person.
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem "Nightmares".
Thank you Julia.....it was my pleasure.....hugs n smiles....T xo ?
Julie, what an amazing debut! A great write, vivid and powerful. Nightmares are horrid things, may they become dreams x Sarfraz x
Thank you.
Julie, my pleasure, if you interested, my 1st book was published last week. It would be nice to get some reviews.
https://www.amazon.co.uk/Eighty-Four-Pins-Sarfraz-Ahmed/dp/1916276652
A very good debut write , well done and brilliantly written :)
Thank you.
This is really well written capturing nightmares :)
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