Poem -
Nine years + old
Dad takes us for fish and chips
A rare treat
We are many he is one
He is wearing a smile like
He's trying to wear a smile
Like he's enjoying this time
Not divorced for a while
The seafront is dark
Windy and cold
The fairground is shut
I am nine years + old
I want to go home
M ~
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It's Hard memories of youth sometimes. A Nice Write.
Thanks J x
Sorry I'm flooding you... just catching up... thankyou Jaques x
Bittersweet memories of youth! Well written, M
Thanks so much my friend x
Thanks B x
I always find it a scary feeling. When, it's dark and cold and you are not where you want to be xx
Exactly... thanks so much Tina x
Or... you can't find the place you want to be.. because it doesn't exist anymore.
Thanks so much Tina... always lush when you come on... hugs xx
Hello M...
WOW!
You could eat...
You could have ended up at the Bar honing your Pinball Skills...
Great wite!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong Ice Queen
Thanyou S x
Been on my mind that I've slacked off leaving comments for others, so here goes. For me, it's the little traumas, disturbed by the sea and a park that's closed. These things affect us, especially when we're young. Or for that feel like we are.
Yea exactly... the little traumas and the sense of things not being 'right'
these things stay with us thanks R x
Most profound emotion deep deep reflections. Sad yet most beautiful ❤️
Thanks so much for your lovely comment x
Straight
out of the mouths
of babes ..
You've still got it
Babe ..
Write on & always ..
Your
biggest fan ME x
Oh Nev... what a compliment!!! I shall treasure that!!! Thankyou. Funny how we really start to review our lives when we get bloody older ...making peace with yesterday maybe... hugs X
Worth every penny M & no kidding 😎🌹👍x