Poem -

Nine years + old

Dad takes us for fish and chips
A rare treat
We are many  he is one
He is wearing a smile like
He's trying to wear a smile
Like he's enjoying this time
Not divorced for a while

The seafront is dark
Windy and cold
The fairground is shut
I am nine years + old

I want to go home

M ~

 

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Being Me

I always find it a scary feeling. When, it's dark and cold and you are not where you want to be xx

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sparrowsong

Hello M...

WOW!

You could eat...

You could have ended up at the Bar honing your Pinball Skills...

Great wite!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong Ice Queen

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Rory McGinlay

Been on my mind that I've slacked off leaving comments for others, so here goes. For me, it's the little traumas, disturbed by the sea and a park that's closed. These things affect us, especially when we're young. Or for that feel like we are.

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