Poem -
NO HOPE
I cannot believe this is happening again
I swore for a week I had gone into remission
But of course not
That would be too simple and would make me happy
If the pressure in my head would subside
For only an instant than I could breathe
This pain is too much to handle by myself
I can feel every part of my body going to hell
Just for once I want more than two days a month
To make it out of bed
The symptoms are literally killing me
I cannot break free
Pain is overwhelming
What happens when your body starts rejecting
Every single medication that could be helping
I think I figured it out
You lose all hope and kill yourself
© 2014 Valerie Lynn
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Comments
Very daring and sincere.
Nicely wrote, just hope its not you.
Thank you Mark! Well to be honest yes this poem has to do with me. I wrote it the other night when I didn't know what to do. Unfortunately when the pressure in my head gets extremely severe my mind takes me to a dark place. I just used this poem to vent. I was not even expecting any comments and I want to thank you so much for taking the time to read it and leave me a comment!
Val <3
Congrats on your winning nomination
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hi WILLIAMSJI! Thank you for the sweet message! As always I love your comments! You are so inspiring!
Val <3
wow I'm speechless - I can totally relate - btw congrats
Henry - Thank you for leaving me a message and for the congrats! I hope you didn't mean you can relate to the last line in my poem because that would make me sad :( If you ever want to talk to me or vent about anything I will be here! Just send me a message anytime if you want to talk. I wrote this when I was feeling depressed. Sometimes the thoughts seem to get the best of me but I try to remain positive. Some days are harder than others. I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave me a comment. Hope you are having a good day!
Val <3