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No Longer in The Making

No Longer in The Making

He chose to wear Oud Oak that day and she, Patchouli
Oh’ but if only .................................................................. 
All the rest might now be long consigned to history  ...

 

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Marion

Cryptic and clever Neville, a few short lines lamenting the memories which( to me) can be as painful as the loss itself x

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Neville

Your words have always meant so very much to me Marion .. thank you kindly .. Neville x
 

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Shaun Cronick

It is as Marion states Neville and a short one that really packs a punch and delivers it with deft poetry skill.
Less is more on display here with three lines that shine but speak volumes.
Wishing you well my friend and all the seasonal best to you and family.
 

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Neville

Believe it or not Shaun, I have been thinking about you these last few days & wondering how things are in your world .. All good, I hope ..

The words you have left here for me are so much appreciated, as always my friend .. Thank you for the gift of them .. 

Seasonal Best to You & Yours mate ....................... Neville :) 

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Gwendoline

Neville this is achingly sad. Even the title hangs heavy on the heart strings. You have a true gift with expressing visually so much in so few words. Sorry I haven’t been on Cosmo of late. I need to message you soon. Probably once Christmas Day is done with. All the best my friend 
Gwen x

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Neville

Thank you Gwen .. if you don't catch me before, have a super FAB Christmas with those you love & hold dear ................................. N x

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Gwendoline

Have a wonderful Christmas Neville and I look forward to reading more of you in the new year :) x 

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Neville

......................... :) x

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