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"No sobriety"

"No sobriety"

Way up high on the 30th floor, I'm just standing staring at the door.
Will the knocker knock, will the bell ring, for my broken heart is dying to sing.. 

"I don't care about your gin sodden lips, I don't care about your mental health dips, I just love you and need you here by my side, because the day that you left was the day that I cried" 

I know I can help you just please let me try, listen, give heed to my passionate cry, for your sake just stop! climbing down into hell, I promise! , I promise! one day you'll be well. 

"I don't care about your gin sodden lips, I don't care about your mental health dips, I just love you and need you here by my side, because the day that you left was the day that I cried" 

​​​​Therapy, talking and keep  yourself sane, listen to reason it's so good for the pain, don't turn your back on the tunnel ahead, keep it in front, yes! inside your head

"I don't care about your gin sodden lips, I don't care about your mental health dips, I just love you and need you here by my side,  because the day that you left was the day that I cried" 

Your heads in your hands, with anguish and guilt, the love that you showed just started to wilt, you chose your path, you chose the drink! 

"I don't care about your gin sodden lips, I don't care about your mental health dips, I just love you and need you here by my side, because the day that you left was the day that I cried" 

I'm still high up on the 30th floor, but no longer standing staring at the front door, for I know now the bell won't ring, and I know in my heart that it will never sing, I've cried my last tear, I've lamented my last, for now and forever you're a ghost from my past. 

"For the last time I've kissed your gin sodden lips, I've comforted you through your mental health dips, I did really love you and want you by my side, but no longer not never shall ever cry. 
but 

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Tony Taylor

WOW!! KEITH!!...what a great read that was for me.....such powerfully honest phrasing throughout.....and it has a cadence....a lovely melancholic rhythm to it when you read it aloud.....and although it is melancholy it has a ring of hope that truly makes it a wonderfully poetic read!!......ALL STARS & PINNED!!.....a great write brother!!.....Bravo!!.....Peace n Stuff!!.......T xo  : )

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Keith Stubbs

Hey Tony Great to hear from you, I hope all is well with you and finding peace, thanks for very positive comment... Peace bro✌️✌️✌️✌️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Wayne Stubbs

Brilliant unc! Fantastic read pal!! 👏👏👏👏👌☮️💜

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Keith Stubbs

✌️✌️😂 Mr radio star, can't wait pal, av you told Tony yet 

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The fish of the sea

Agree with Cherie on this one, a song for me, awesome flowing write that's an inspiration for me. Kudos Keith! Kind regards. TFOTS

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Keith Stubbs

TFOTS cheers for lovely comment, I ad a tune in my head but alas I ain't musical at all lol 

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