Poem -

none sense to the thinker

none sense to the thinker

so dull to a life 
so dead to the eyes 
so lost 

so  gone i am to the voices 
so played into my songs
 
so now to the now..... i am
for the light 
for the path
we wait....we wait....

we still our being
to the verses upon another verse
so dull

a laugh it seems

so dead 
to the ears
to the eyes

as we walk pass by 
                                       
it seems  so dull to a love 
for today came in every second to the thinker

and peace placed itself
like a psalm TO A PRAISE
 upon the next word

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RG

Very thought provoking read , your last couple entries and including this one all seem to leave the reader much room for self interpretation, it makes it very desirable to read and gets the wheels turning in ones mind. I'm a fan , ~Rob 

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Liliana of the ...

Different. 
I like the trail of thought. 
And agree. 
Very muddled ones life maybe, there is sense in madness eventually. 

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Gwendoline

Hello Lorris
I loved the momentum in your words with this. The lines bob and blend into the next beautifully. For me this is a retreat into the self. Detaching from the reality of this life and seeing it as a hollow existence. The solace is found within, where light is sensed and the bigger picture beyond this reality awaits. Just my take of course :) 
Many thanks for sharing, thoroughly enjoyed 
Gwen x 

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Terry Reeves

Hi Lorris,
You have special insight
which few of us can claim.
Love,
Terry.
xoxo :)

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Marion

I'm.kinda with you Lorris 

'so dull to.a life
so dead to the eyes
so lost'

Said it all for me...great write x
 

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Being Me

Brilliant, Lorris, brilliant x

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Being Me

And a happy new year to you too x

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