NORTHERN LINE
Different stages,
Different races,
Among all of them future matches,
Women and men are all together,
With the silly idea that it will be forever,
Too many stops to achieve the goal,
Too many steps to loose control,
Rich and poor and middle class on the black line,
I hope that one day we can be fine.
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Hey IVAN!!.....I like where this is coming from....a place of reflection and concern for ALL of humanity!!.......VERY cool my friend!!......ALL STARS!!.... well done dear poet brother!!...... and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........ T xo 🐧✴❤
Hey Tony,thanks for all your kind words 👍👍👍
My favourite tube line. Wonderful poem, Welcome..
Nigel
Thanks Nigel,this is my favourite line too 😉😉😉
A novel and inspirational way of comparing life- I like this very much and will be looking to read more of your work. Welcome to the Cosmo family! xx
You're too kind ,thank you very much👍👍👍
Ivan, Nice piece of work that deserves the nomination. And on the first poem...Can't wait to see what is coming next. Welcome to Cosmo...I am honored to be your first follower...Terry Kay
Thanks Terry,I'm very glad that you liked my first job,it's very important for me....and another thanks about your following me Ivan 👍😉💋
Congratulations and welcome to Cosmofunnel , best of luck ❤️
Thanks mate and to you too 👍👍👍
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Lovely lines Ivan. Warm regards.
Thanks Cleo 👍