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NORTHERN LINE

Different stages,
Different races,
Among all of them future matches,
Women and men are all together,
With the silly idea that it will be forever,
Too many stops to achieve the goal,
Too many steps to loose control,
Rich and poor and middle class on the black line,
I hope that one day we can be fine.

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Tony Taylor

Hey IVAN!!.....I like where this is coming from....a place of reflection and concern for ALL of humanity!!.......VERY cool my friend!!......ALL STARS!!.... well done dear poet brother!!...... and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........ T xo 🐧✴❀

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Ivan Marchi

Hey Tony,thanks for all your kind words πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Nigel Cresswell

My favourite tube line. Wonderful poem, Welcome..
Nigel

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Ivan Marchi

Thanks Nigel,this is my favourite line too πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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lodigiana

A novel and inspirational way of comparing life- I like this very much and will be looking to read more of your work. Welcome to the Cosmo family! xx

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Ivan Marchi

You're too kind ,thank you very muchπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Terry Kay

Ivan, Nice piece of work that deserves the nomination.Β  And on the first poem...Can't wait to see what is coming next. Welcome to Cosmo...I am honored to be your first follower...Terry Kay

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Ivan Marchi

Thanks Terry,I'm very gladΒ  that you liked my first job,it's very important for me....and another thanks about your following me Ivan πŸ‘πŸ˜‰πŸ’‹

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deano

Congratulations and welcome to Cosmofunnel , best of luck ❀️

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Ivan Marchi

Thanks mate and to you too πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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