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Tony Taylor

Hey ZYAIRE!! (cool name)...... and a VERY powerful write on love's inexplicabilities.......the tender sadness of loss beautifully woven here...... with VERY creative formatting and a strong sense of rhythm and timing .........the way you've used repetition adds greatly to the flow you accomplished here as well.........ALL STARS!!...... well done...... and..... WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo. ?☀✴✳

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