Poem -
Numb
For that same person...
I'm hurting because I'm numb, I need help to feel some.
Something to be ok, but all i do is wait all day.
At night I cry and I could never understand why.
Im lost and confused, feeling somewhat abused.
You're there your not, just go, please stop.
I'm numb, I'm numb, I'm completely done.
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Comments
Well written!
You did a nice job with adding details about how you felt. Feeling numb, is hard to put into mere words. I've had those feelings after losing a person once loved. During bouts of depression, when the sky darkens, the Earth freezes and the air feels stagnant, with the feelings of regret, a longing to hold a person in your arms, once again. Good job with creating emotion.
I cannot wait to read more of your poetry.
Thank you for your kind comment.