Poem - 20 January 2020, 02:08

Numb

For that same person...

Dee Williams

I'm hurting because I'm numb, I need help to feel some.

Something to be ok, but all i do is wait all day.

At night I cry and I could never understand why.

Im lost and confused, feeling somewhat abused.

You're there your not, just go, please stop.

I'm numb, I'm numb, I'm completely done.

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Katina Woodruff...20 January 2020, 04:07

Well written!
You did a nice job with adding details about how you felt. Feeling numb, is hard to put into mere words. I've had those feelings after losing a person once loved. During bouts of depression, when the sky darkens, the Earth freezes and the air feels stagnant, with the feelings of regret, a longing to hold a person in your arms, once again. Good job with creating emotion.

I cannot wait to read more of your poetry.

Dee Williams20 January 2020, 04:09

Thank you for your kind comment.