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Oceanic beauty

I swim deep within the sea
I swim with dolphins
And it set me free
Another world opening up to me
Amazing colours dazzling me
From the various and different species
I see the coral reef and sea anemones
I feel the solitude but I am not alone
I see a great whale passing me
There are so many incredible things
From small crustaceans live by vents of volcanos
That should be crushed by the pressure I believe
They have no sight for there is no light
They are an incredible fete of the sea
Surviving in an an environment that would kill you and me
Compare them to a great and gentle whale
So very huge it takes your breathe away
It shows how the sea can accommodate
Many more things that creation made
It is a home to everything
This different world this seeming fantasy
But everything in and about it is real
And to me has the most beautiful appeal.

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Dean Kuch

G'day again, Fauxcroft.
Our knowledge concerning creatures, craters, cliffs and creation down deep in the fathomless depths of earth's oceans is far less than our extensive knowledge of the solar system.
It's a virtually unexplored world, for the most part.
Although technology is allowing us to learn more, there are still so many things we still have yet to uncover and discover.
Keep 'em comin' and I'll keep reading and commenting.
I wish I could say the same for many who read my work.
~Dean Kuch.
 

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Fauxcroft

Thank you very much I like your work a lot and shall also look to comment more. 

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Dean Kuch

You're very welcome.
I wasn't referring to you or pointing you out specifically.
My readership has dwindled considerably across the board, it seems.
Surely I haven't worn out my welcome here already?
Happy writing...
~Dean ?

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Fauxcroft

Dean, I seem to be suffering the same as yourself from low levels of readers despite trying to mix it it up a bit. Keep up the good stuff.

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