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October Chills

October Chills

Never did I see deathΒ so pretty,
Than in the shades of brimming yellow and austere red,
Not in sickly countenance,
Nor the shedding of health,
Not in sallow greys or illness colours,
But wonder in the shades of orange mosaic,
Never had such a deathΒ been so pretty,
Swaying sweetly, supplely, in such harmony,
Rendering our breath caught and quiet,
Our thoughts flummoxed,
The pyramid of sense,Β 
turned over and spinning
in outer orbs of the surreal,
Grey shades and glitter,
Dawning light breakingΒ 
through shell of the sky,
Earthen smell of things dying,
but of nature and smell so sweet,
Earth renewing in death,Β 
Misty atmospheres,Β 
October smells and chills,
The still undercurrent
rubbing the belly of the leaves,
In the trees gossiping whispers,
But in comfort sweetly so
And the healthy greenΒ 
not dare to boast against
its aged beauty friends,
The trends of its colours
in chameleon mirage,Β 
The golden flakes
and ruby gems speckled,
CloudsΒ fluttered
in grey tears
likeΒ weepy tissue paper,
Translucent in the crowning glorious bright brow,
The beating heart light,
Breathing through the crisp autumn sky,
Never has deathΒ been so pretty,
As when autumn leaves fly.

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Tony Taylor

Wow!! -VICTORIA!!.... haven't read you before (my loss)....... this is an awesome display of poetic prose in a consistent barrage of eloquent phrasing .....remaining true to its subject matter and creating a perfect ambiance for the perceiving of Falls fragrances and chill in the air..... which so many of us can relate to....... great wordsmithing here sweet poetess....... well conceived and beautifully delivered......ALL STARS....... well done......LOVE and ROCKETS ......T xo

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Tony Taylor

Ps. Was that picture you chose.....a Salvador Dali.?..... looks like his stuff but.... animated or something?...... just curious?!.......T xo

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VictoriaHillary_

Hi, thanks for the comment. So glad you like the poem. Yes. I believe it's Salvador Dali and it's just been painted on a coloring book app.Β 

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