Of time and of love

Did you know...
thereโs a time machine inside you and I?
a myth to those who cannot see it
yet to me a journey most definitely possible ย
from two-thousand and twenty-four
right back to nineteen-eighty-nine
in a blink of an eye
who could deny my magnificent mind?
or of that youthful love that once was?
withered with the rose petals of time
faded in-between life and death itself
thus drifting from a once young lover
falling into the frailest of hands
and then onto the wisest of hearts
that has many a tale to tell.
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This is written really well Shirley...time can also stop dead, freezing us in a moment, that continues for years....this a beautiful write of the power of memory x
The power of the memory, I just love that, thank you so much dear Marion. ๐น
My time machine, can go back 30 years, but it lost what happened 10 mins ago
really enjoyed this Shirleyย
Lorna xx
So can mine dear Lorna, lol thank you for such a gorgeous review. ๐น
Hello Shirley...
Is yours a little Wonky?
Mine can be...
โโโโโโ5 minutes can feel like an hour...
3 hours can feel like 1 hour...
People ask me the time sometimes...
Then I realize...
Great question...
I have no idea...
I will check right now...
Other times it's like...
That's all it is?
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Is yours like that?
Great write...
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
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Yes dear sparrowsong, but it's because I'm 49 and in menopause lol ๐คฃย thank you for coming by dear poetess. ๐น
Wow you chronicled your life from youth to ageing in a very interesting creative way. Indeed wisdom comes mostly with age. Kudos!
plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Thank you so much ๐น
Love the sweetness I felt through out!!! Made me hopeful for SOMEDAY ๐ค๐ค๐ค..I want trembling and butterflies but most importantly from the very beginning until lifes inevitable end all i need to know is I lived till I died with my truest of friend ๐ค๐ค๐ค
Hello dear Raechel Ray, so very kind of you to come by here, I have studied love since I was born really, every single type but my favourite of all is romantic love and I really am so very humbled you have come by to read and to leave a lovely review. Thank you. It is always better to be alone than with the wrong person I've been there and done that, I have a poetry book all about it. One of my own personal favourites is called butterflies are rare because it's here if you ever want to read it, but actually most everything I write is about love thank you so much . ๐น