Poem -
old grapes
the look is like old grapes
withered on the vine
neither scarred green
nor scarred black
maybe somewhere between
perhaps begging for solace
for a kindness to say
look away look away
grief is not yours today
M ~
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Two last lines for me. A strong finish is a must. It makes the poem, don't it M
Thanks R... you should know... you are a master at a strong finish... hugs x
Great little poem with huge depth and big meaning. And, like Rory says, those last two lines .... brilliant xx
Aw thanks love... you're really kind... appreciated xx
Strong and beautiful little poem, M.
Thanks so much B... appreciated x