On Adultery

Sometimes one is slammed, left yearning
Like a fool, so much pain
Anxious, that the hallowed hour approaching
BlindsΒ one toΒ that, which is sacrosanct
Bleeding inside, for the anticipated
Angry about that which cannot be debated
The preacher has spoken, you're tainted
Everyone knows, you've sinned
You've committed adultery, you're painted
You thought it was Love, you'd do it again
The inexplicable, has horribly occurred
And entirely eaten away, your steely self worth
Amid the timbrels, and retribution's resort
A plethora of whisperers , whispering in anger
Or, just for sport...
That which is untamed, inside
That feral piece of the human soul
That rises to the surface, in dire times
That argent revelry that cannot be controlled
These, one must cling too, when life is most grave
Or one may not live, to see happiness again...
Tony Taylor
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wow Tony someone was harsh giving you stars. this is beautiful. You deserve 5 for all your hard work on this piece. you know I am your biggest fan.
Yay!! ~Thanx DARKLY!!........i was a little taken aback!!...... it was a write for a friend of mine and something VERY personal to me...... but "Good lookin' out !!"".......you're the coolest girlfriend!!...... smiles........ LOVEΒ and ROCKETS!!........T xo.Β ?Β
strong words somber poem well written linda
Thanx LINDA!!......I agree totally......." somber words" for sure....... appreciate it sweet poetess!!......... smiles.......T xo.Β ?
Hi Tony. loved this piece way to bare your soul my friend.Β
cheers jeff
Thanx so much JEFF!!.....appreciate your ink brother!!.......always!!......your prose is impressive!!!.......ttyl........T xoΒ Β ?
Hi Β Tony Β I Β have witnessed how betrayal in marriage and relationships
destroy people, so much hurt Β involved
You wrote a poignant poem describing the aftermath of what happensΒ
when the adultery is known, written beautifully
Β A great poemΒ Β Love n hugs Debs xo
DEBS!!::You' re the coolest!!.......I REALLY appreciate you commenting on this one....... seemed I offended some with this one....... or I thought so at first........ but you're here now....... so it couldn't be all that bad....... always appreciate your understanding and comprehension skills my friend!!....... high fives sister girl!!......... smiles........T xo.Β ?