Poem -
On Love And Loss
Like "Thanatopsis"
In the majesty of the complaining brooks
A major contemplation
On death's thrombosis
Where fear begins to tear you apart
And screams,
"You cannot get wounded
when you've got no heart!"
From the tapering summits
Of divided minarets
Protecting the castles of
Love and Death
I can't stand to see you
This way
When two souls stand up
Erect and strong
The lotic movement of Love's
Curving brooks
Takes into account
Young wantonness
And the rapture felt
While in
The "Cherry Ripe"
Springtime of
Love and Loss...
Tony Taylor
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Hi Tony Oh dear lord i have tears i had to lookΒ
"Thanatopsis" a poem elegy Β in an attempt to consoleΒ Β
or the word meant meditation or contemplation of death
Your poem touched my heart Β deeply IΒ have never felt this wayΒ
after reading Any poem before! i have no wordsΒ Β
Amazing write! love n hugs Debs xo
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Hey Thanx DEBS!!....I Love this comment......."Thanatopsis" is a poem by William Cullen Bryant"...... that begins by talking about how nature's beauty can help relieve a man's pain.... and then of course goes onto to be a contemplation on death.... which is why I think it felt so powerful to you........I am such a fortunate writer to have someone who reads poetry for the sheer Love of it!!......... bravo sweetheart!!.........thanx for being the best at emerging themselves in the writers ideas and intent!!........ stay you girlfriend....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.Β ?
The "Cherry Ripe"
Springtime of
Dude man Dude such a fantastic line !!!!!!!! you r the KING
Thanx MARK!!...... Nice choice bro!!........ smiles.....T xo ?
beautiful write Tony, you are so gifted
Thanx LISA!!...... you're the grooviest!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.Β ?