Poem -
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Oh, have you seen them?
I mean... really... really...
looked
At the sparkle of the
silverness
Those light pink smokey rays
The golden bluey
squashiness, the dreamy soft
grey haze....
The sheer ripeness, the
fullness...
Like sweet melons plucked
in misty dawns
The awesome beauty of that
rain cloud
In the ever rolling... on + on
I'd like to dROWn in them
M P 6/4/21
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Comments
Very, very clever poetry Marion, seems like a haze, like a dream you can`t remember but you know it was important. Sinking into the abstractness. Love it. Fascinating write here! Enjoy your work.
Thanks Max x
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I always think clouds have such an energy a out them, especially those big billows dark rain clouds that tease a silver lining. Great work Marion ⚘x
Hiya Tina...I was actually really down when I wrote this, thought the clouds would be a beautiful way to drown.
Lol...sorry...it's true though...they are a truly beautiful form of water. I know most people look for silver linings but ...you know...this is me..lol. I've actually just read the silver linings play book ..it's a beautiful read. Thanks love...hugs xxx
Drowning in a cloud... Only a poet could think of that! So sorry to hear you were very down ... totally understandable though. Bless you, I hope you begin to find better days again... somehow ❤️ x