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On Ophelia Inspired by Jason Brown’s “Fall of a Sparrow”

On Ophelia   Inspired by Jason Brown’s  “Fall of a Sparrow”

Some say a gentle sparrow

Some say a hawk so fierce

Was her vulva pure and narrow

Or by many men been pierced

Was Hamlet her heart held hero

Or but a tool for access to the throne

Was it true she worshiped Nero

And her soul was cold as stone

When she climbed atop the Willow tree

Did she really slip and fall

Or jump and say "God take me"

Oh, the mystery of it all
 

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Jason Brown

Larry, my dear friend...

So glad you chose to post this. It is a work of exquisite beauty. As such, it's difficult to pinpoint one or two lines as 'favourite'...but I do have an especial liking for...

Was Hamlet her heart held hero

...the alliteration and phrasing here, particularly, appeals to me; but, really, the entire work is delightful, insightful and intriguing.

My own poem was prompted by Tony Taylor's piece on the same subject; the torch of inspiration getting passed between us from poet to poet, artist to artist, questioner to questioner: There may not be any definitive answers (or maybe there are?), but it's really rather wonderful that we're all asking the same questions!!

your friend & fan,

J ;)

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Larry Ran

My Dear Friend Jason,

You honor me so with these words of adulation.  Thank you so much for your inspiration, and suggesting that I post it on my own page.  It is so wonderful how we kindle each others minds and light fires in their hearts.  This is an amazing coterie that we all share.  It has been the fulfillment of my soul.

Peace and Love,

Larry xxx

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Larry This is Wonderful Although i only know the story 
vaguely, my son did act in a modern updated version 
of the story and I watched him in the theater,
A story with many questions of Ophelia`s demise 
That you superbly interpreted through your own imagination
Great piece of poetry I enjoyed 

 

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Larry Ran

Hi Dear Debs,

I originally wrote this to Jason, as a reply to his lovely poem.  It is only at his request, that I published it on my own site.  I owe him a great debt of gratitude for it's inspiration, and it's favorable comments.  It is very interesting that you have a history through your son, dealing with Ophelia.  I am so happy you enjoyed my version.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

Larry xxx

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