" ON PLEASURE'S SIGHT "

The golden tan,
On lovers hands,
Caressing sand,
On summers day.
I stop to stare,
And dare compare,
Sweet dames so fair,
That pass my way.
The single rose,
That ever grows,
Amidst the snows,
Of winter's birth.
These petals fair,
Sniff winter's air,
I come to care,
And share my mirth.
Birds in their flight,
Pass through my sight,
Ah, beauty's bright,
I look, I smile.
Blue breaking waves,
Sweet shapes, concave,
The thanks I gave,
I bask a while.
Beyond measure,
Senses treasure,
Paradise pleasure,
Unmasked with doves.
The gift that brings,
Free flying wings,
The song that sings,
Be pleasure love.
Tony Taylor. (Chicago)
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Hi Tony, thanks for this sweet romantic write. You painted a lovely summer. Cheers.
Thanx so much Cleo!!.......... always love to hear from you sweet poetess!! ...........thanx for this!!.......... Love and Rockets!!...........T xo
Hi Tony...... A beautiful read, such tender words. I love the way you have presented it formatted?
I have much to learn lol
Love and hugs.. your friend ...Debs xo
LOL!!........I don't think you have much to learn about the heart of poetry sister girl......... terminology just comes with time............thanx so much for this DEBS!!.......... your friend and admirer...........T xo
Wow Tony - In your own words - I'm amazed at your talent, you can turn such simple words into perfect rhythm, flow and your depth of meaning is truly great - MMMMM I need to think about my style as I have a lot to learn still.
Mark Paul
Dude!! ~ I'm sorry... but........ that write you did yesterday about being in the military at a young age..... called KILLING something ~ can't remember the title......... but it was outstanding brother...... keep doing what you're doing......... you've got skills bro!!........thanx for this Mark!!........... Love and Rockets!!.......T xo
Hello Tony...
Between the river write and this one...
Only thing I can say is absolutely beautiful and amazing!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs and Smiles!
Love and Rockets!
Feathers
Hey dear FEATHERS!!....... girl!!........ you SO know, what's been goin' down with the synchronicity.........thanx so much for this.......... I've got a response coming for you too!!.........I haven't forgotten!!............... peace girlfriend!!.......... out!........T xo