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Once Upon A Line

I used to like a line but now I just sip wine.

It kept one awake, it made one fake, no give or take, just out to make myself feel good, and heighten ones amorous mood

Made one talk and talk and talk and walk and walk and walk

I talked the talk and walked the walk

Eyes alert always ready to flirt

Ate no food, felt no hunger, normality all asunder 

Beware

If you follow the thick white line, in a short space of time your life quality will decline, no more feeling fine. That's why now one just sips wine and takes ones time, to talk and walk

Slurp gulp burp

Lovely freshens ones palate

And 

Easier on ones wallet

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William Wallace

Hello val hope ye well, thanks for reply bye bye for now.

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BLOSSOM

Lol William, a clever write!!  Liked the structure and repetition, and content was on the ball!  Great job!!  Big vote from me:)

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Emma Theedom

Great use of structure. Have to praise your title though, one of the most eye catching ones I've read.

Creative real talk, love it!
 

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