Once Upon A Line

I used to like a line but now I just sip wine.
It kept one awake, it made one fake, no give or take, just out to make myself feel good, and heighten ones amorous mood
Made one talk and talk and talk and walk and walk and walk
I talked the talk and walked the walk
Eyes alert always ready to flirt
Ate no food, felt no hunger, normality all asunderÂ
Beware
If you follow the thick white line, in a short space of time your life quality will decline, no more feeling fine. That's why now one just sips wine and takes ones time, to talk and walk
Slurp gulp burp
Lovely freshens ones palate
AndÂ
Easier on ones wallet
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You are so right!
val
Hello val hope ye well, thanks for reply bye bye for now.
Lol William, a clever write!! Â Liked the structure and repetition, and content was on the ball! Â Great job!! Â Big vote from me:)
Hi Rachel, thanks a lot.
good write congrats x
Thanks for reading Susan.
Great use of structure. Have to praise your title though, one of the most eye catching ones I've read.
Creative real talk, love it!
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Thank you EmmaÂ