Poem -
One:
I wish to drain the colors
Out of the room
Splash our love
Under faceless moon,
A flower a year
Garden for life
One: lucky man
One: happy wife
Focus all o'me
To everybit a'you
Shielded comforters create a world
Where midnight's electric blue.
Through all our dark
We beat with rainbow hearts
Bleeding color into the grey
Controlling themes each day,
To plod passion paint
One: happy wife, one:Â lucky man
Observe living breathing dying art....
Devoted palms grip forever hands.
To my wife Jessica,
Happy Birthday!
Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
Hi  Devon  what a great Happy Birthday to your wife i m sureÂ
she will love your poem It reallyis lovely. Showing how much you love her
in a splendid way really enjoyed... Best wishes DebsÂ
Â
Why thank you so much Deborah. These love writes don't come to me often so when theydk I put my best into my words and reach deep down to express my raw passionate love, from the heart sounds better lol. I hope she loves it. Best wishes in return.
Hello Devon...
Beautiful Birthday Dedication!
Happy Birthday Jessica...
Have a great time celebrating and loving...
Hugs and Smiles!Â
sparrowsongÂ
Thanks Sparrowsong.
Now I have to put this in the card I got her and hope she loves it. She's nice she'll say she does even if she doesn't lol jk. Love and peace kind soaring soul.
Hey Captain D!!........there is NO WAY she won't love this!!.......... It's REALLY beautiful........ with words and phrasing that ring true............ with perfect formatting to enhance such moving phrases~ and the way you used color to maintain a gorgeous continuity.is just plain poetic!!........... Happy Birthday Jessica!!......... and high fives for my favorite nucleus of a family of loving women!!.......... good stuff brother!!.......... Love and Rockets!!............T xo
I was teally trying to draw some inspiration from some old love poetry but I think this was all from deep within and the love. I tried focusing on her smiling face. I think she will too! Always good to hear that great Tony Taylor encouragement, its always so enthusiastic and lively upbeat, never change. Thanks.
One word. Beautiful.
Thanks so much Jacklyn. It is nowhere near as beautiful as my wife.Â
Hi Devon,
Few women in the world receive such a profound and heartfelt birthday card, not from the stalls of a vendor, but the caverns of your heart. I say to Jessica, you have been blessed by the stars to have such a man who honors your soul. Exquisite write my poetic brother.
Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Larry man...thanks. This is such a wonderful comment that I say to you good sir you are a gentleman and a scholar. Peace and love also to you my fellow poet.