Poem -
ONE day AT a TIME
All the faces hung in neat
rows
Dangling from steel coat
hangers
Precisely in line
With the moth eaten clothes
While the essence, now naked
Tried hard to decide
To choose any costume
In which to reside, for just
One more day
M P 16/3/21
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I'm not sure what this is about Marion, one day at a time of just existing?I'm so sorry if that is the meaning but the concept and write is worth stars in itself!. Your talent in what ever your topic,concept happens to be is so awesome ! that we all learn from each of your writes! hugs!.....................................Jim
Hi Jim...you got it in your first line though half the time I only vaguely know what I mean myself ...lol...the other half I just hope a reader will tell me...and you did!! 😄😊...your comment is so kind Jim, you are a lovely soul my friend X
You gave me stars on my first poem whether I deserve it ,doubt it ,but you did, and I probably would have just quit if you hadn't! and I've been learning from you ever since! thank you!................Jim
Oh Jim...I don't think anyone can learn from me...I just post the crap in my head...but honestly...your kindness has brought a tear to my eye. And your first post?...it was excellent my friend ❤️
Something got you writing and posting, whatever that crap is, it has divine aspects, and brilliantly beautiful effects on the human spirit. If you aren't aware of it, then pay more attention to how many people faint over; when you post, and the multitudes of loving admirers that read them, like me, and dream of having some of that crap! lol!....................Jim
Ha ha...I have often wondered about these 600 invisible cosmolites that read all our posts Jim...I have my theories ...lol...😄😄😆
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Thanks love...look...I'm.responding on here...progress!! 🤗🤗🤗
Yes and don’t think I’m not noticing & so happy to see you as always Marion but I understand you without you ever needing to justify anything ❤️❤️❤️
I know you do...it's up and down now Jill...one good day then four days in bed!! ...but I miss the banter ...you have all helped me enormously even if you don't know it ❤️❤️❤️
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I'm with Jill!
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All we can really do is take one day at a time. Then, we hope love, and life, are kind to us. You wish for all promise to be kept, and for fate to turn in your favour !
Warm wishes. x
Exactly...I'm trying to work out who made the promises first though!! Thanks a much Richard x