One Day Without You
Our whole world is here, it’s mine and it’s yours.
Built up throughout gone by until now, one day
Without you seems too long.
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You and me that’s how it’s always been,
Trying to imagine you not being here is
Enough to bring tears.
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Our whole world is here, it’s mine and it’s yours.
Built up throughout gone by until now, one day
Without you seems too long.
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If one thing is out of place, then everything else
Struggles to fit in as well, that’s how it feels when
You’re not here.
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Our whole world is here, it’s mine and it’s yours.
Built up throughout gone by until now, one day
Without you seems too long.
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One day or night, either way it doesn’t matter.
Not having you here seems abnormal to me,
It’s more than just a feeling, its reality.
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Our whole world is here, it’s mine and it’s yours.
Built up throughout gone by until now, one day
Without you seems too long.
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Comments
John... Love this write! Your alternating/repeating stanza to emphasis "one day without you seems too long" murmurs the hurt and loneliness. You take the reader inside your heart and share each beat which thrums a delicate sadness: "one day without you seems too long".Â
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Thank You For Your Kind Warming Comments. So Glad You Liked The Poem. To Me Being able to connect with the reader is significantly important. In this case it rings bells of truth! Than you once again.