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One little thank you 💙

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One little thank you 💙

When I rescued you from solace did you care, after I found your self esteem that wasn’t there..Did you even notice me as I helped your sanity..When I saved you from the demons in your head

You were desperate with tears rolling down your face in the deepest, darkest scariest of place..
So you called me on your phone, you were distitute, all alone..Then I rushed and smothered you in my embrace

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Yet did you ever think about me,
since you packed your things and wanted to be free..I had fallen in love with you, now I’m left feelin’ so blue and I haven’t got a clue what I did do

Just one little thank you would be good, some appreciation for your gratitude..I’m not asking for too much, only a greatfulness as such..
Maybe call on me when your in the neighbourhood..

 

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A Lonely Journey

OK, JIlloian, 
Now you're like Bob Dylan on steroids, creating a song a minute! 
Don't get me wrong, I love them! That was particularly beautiful, and hauntingly sad, but I can't believe how quick you write(maybe that's why you used the word 'sunce' (LOL! Kidding! I know what the word was, but like sunce better). 
Honestly, I love your mind, and your writing. You write so much, and you write fun, and serious, and deep, and it's just a wonderful thing to see. You're awesome! 
Hugs, 
Matthew. 

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Jill Tait

Aww I best so n change sunce lol since its wrong haha Thanks luv ❤️💙🤣

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A Lonely Journey

No Jillinator! 
I liked sunce, please don't change. lol. 
And please don't ever be taken aback by my kidding! We only pick on the ones we really, really like, and I kid around with you because I think you're awesome, OK? 
Hugs, 
Matthew. 

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The fish of the sea

Absolutely love this work Jill! Wish I had the patience to write songs... I enjoyed this one especially a lot. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea 

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Jill Tait

Awwww Thank you my lovely ❤️❤️❤️

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Marion

I'm.glad I didn't miss this one Jill...you are a really clever lady and your work.of the highest standard always...enjoyed the read love...hugs 💕

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Jill Tait

Aww Thank you my lovely lass ❤️💕❤️

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