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ONE VERY BEAUTIFUL DAY

ONE VERY BEAUTIFUL DAY

No more tears in the rain...

Say goodbye to heartache and pain...

Lay it down and never look back...

Love will be waiting for me...

We will never be separated by death and together forever as it should be...

This life I have been given so I must live it...

Learning the lessons to be the best me I can be...

It's the right thing to do because the best will be waiting for me...

Mistakes I make along the way isn't meant to cause you any hurt..

It's my learning curve, a lesson for me as I grow...

I don't want to keep you waiting...

We will know when the time is right...

If I get there first I will wait for you...

Take your time and live your life...

If you make mistakes along the way...

It's just a learning curve...

Apart we grow...

It's just the way that will bring us together on that...

One very beautiful day...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

By Request Greg Etsell 

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The Bee

Hey Sparrow, this is one of your best, I really enjoyed reading, if it's about you then he will come, don't worry about that, you wrote this with your heart, loved it xox :-)

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Cherie...

Greg asked and I tried to reply to his request...

Life here is so temporary...

I believe with all my heart that there's a love so special and here things can fall apart or they die...

Yet, such a special love to have and to hold forever and always and nothing can ever tear it apart...

Some may say I'm dreaming...

Some may call it fantasy...

I am choosing to believe...

Thank you for your comment and support my friend! 

Love n Hugs 

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Bee...

It's a nice thought also painful at the same time...

To lose it after you have it would be a real heartbreak...

To never have it you don't get that type of pain...

I don't mind waiting so when it happens for the both of us we know we never lose it and it was so worth the wait...

:)

Thank you for your comment and support!

I'm happy this was one of your favorites of mine...

Best wishes and Blessings! 

Hugs and Smiles! 

sparrowsong 

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Greg Etsell

sparrowsong great poem I am honored you wrote it so fast and so beautiful you are great writer peace and love to you xxoo

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Rose Sho

Wow!!...This is one of your best writes...I had to read it over and over again....It's very beautiful...I find your words soothing...Your words gave life to the picture...Well done Sweet Sparrow

Lots of love

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

Glad it you liked it...

Thank you for your kind words...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Lorris...

Thank you very much! 

Glad you enjoyed! 

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Sis Sparrowsong A beautiful poem of 
a special love that will last forever in this world and the next 
I enjoyed A pleasure to read 
Hugs Debs 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sweet Rose...

Thank you for the blessing my friend...

Thank you for sweet comment...

Best wishes and Blessings I send your way!

Lots of love 

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Debs...

In this life many reasons can separate love...

The heartbreak hurts worst than anyone can do to you...

Where love always remains loyal and strong that's the best love anyone can find...

Thank you for your comment and support my friend! 

Glad you enjoyed! 

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Richard Waters

Great outpouring from the heart !

A sensitive piece written with admirable intention. Lovely expression !!

Wishing you the best as always !  

Hug.  :)

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sparrowsong

Hello Dblankportrait...

:)

A new drug?

Is this what it sounds like?

That would be some drug that's for sure...

Thank you for your comment and support my friend! 

Best wishes and Blessings! 

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Dblankportrait...

Sparrow probably could...

:)

Is that a request? 

Love back!

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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sparrowsong

Hello Romeo...

Your sweet comments are as touching as your poetry itself...

Thank you very much! 

Best wishes and Blessings always to you my friend! 

Hugs...

:)

sparrowsong 

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