ONLY in heAVen
WhY can't I aCCepT it
The fACt that you're gOnE
I mean, you're oNLY in heAVen
sO, theres not muCH thats
wRonG
You're an aNgel, you're a cHeRuB
yOU have gonE to the liGHT
Just aCCepT it my deaR
and stOp thiS daFt fighT, yes...
It's just aWfuL, A tragedY, and a
liTTle bit sAd, now
Come knEEL with us, pRay
WhAt thE fUCk...are you mAD!!!!!
This is OUTrage, ThiS iS muRdeR
Of the highEST degree
Only someone naMed gOD could
get off sO scoT frEE
I've been THReateneD and
burGled
A precious thing gONE
AMBushed at nigHt and it's all sO
sO WronG
The eNemy vaniSHed, unfaiR, so
unFair
A cowArdly fight, I'm left
PUNCHing deaD aiR
But to make it aLL CleaR goD,
ThiS biTch holds a grudGe
IT fEsTerS down herE,
And it's caLLed gAng waRfaRE
M P 12/8/21
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Marion this has me in floods! the devastation left behind from such a loss rings clear in this poignant write
"A cowArdly fight, I'm left
PUNCHing deaD aiR"
Powerful and such significant words expressed perfectly. We are left fighting a battle we can't even get a fair fight. You have such a way of expressing grief and frustration that echoes with many. A wonderful poem that really allows the reader a glimpse of the pain and utter frustration faced in grief. I liked the cocktail of emotions highlighted. The need to make sense and then the complete anger. Grief is such a rocky road. Love and hugs xoxox (sorry on laptop so can't put hearts)
Gwen xx
Thankyou for your beautiful comment lovely lady xxx
WOW MARION!!....Talk about intensity....this is pure......this is crystal clear......this is expression to a VERY high degree......Like Gwen said ~ a clear glimpse of the pain and frustration that comes with such a loss......it is in the utter clarity of word choices running throughout this write that makes it so damn powerfully moving and emotionally charged!!......PINNED!!......wow!! ~ that's all I got!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......Txo : )
Thanks for your lovely comment my friend X