Poem -
Open your eyes
I've been trying to be the bigger person,
I'm too nice to you,
Because it doesn't matter what I say,
Even when I'm looking out for you,
You do what you think is best,
It doesn't matter about the rest,
This is what makes me worry,
As you normally think things through,
This is what makes me think,
What the hell is going on with you?
I can accept the shit that's happened,
As I'm moving on,
And it appears to me,
The girl I fell for is gone,
But I still care and still worry every minute,
As you're struggling I know as I've done it,
But let me help,
As that's what I'm here for,
And if I get shit again for it,
Well hell what's a little more
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Comments
Normally I'd cringe a little at the kinda rhyming you used...but there's somthing sooo cute an honest..with a pinch of naivety...about this write that I absolutely adore it :)
Greetings Dean,
Powerful words in this piece but only in the name of love are they being muttered...I feel the anger attached to this write but on the same token, felt the love being trampled on and hands tied behind the back of the writer, leaving him without any control in the simpliest of matters, that should involve you both, Even when it's for the good of the recipient. Although its real reasons for being written, is to bring too light the love that has been taken for granite but continuelly does it try and hold on to the momories of the good days gone by, which can be once again, if only the locked door, that has been constructed and placed between the two, has again been opened..Hopefully the well does'nt dry before the single tree which is blocking her view in the dense forest, has finally been removed.....Good luck my friend.. Jim