" OPHELIA ~ Misunderstood ~ "
To be so misunderstood, with an infatuation for Love
The powerful men of her world, hadn't a clue
Having Hamlet himself ~ wondering
"To be or not to be", forever believing
"Love is brief".......
When her father's life ~ was snuffed like a glove
She wore her melancholy as more misunderstood Love
Erotomania, tearing and tormenting
The bi-polar basket case, ever relenting
Singing and taunting in riddles and rhymes
When the Queen announced she'd taken her life
From a whispering, Willow tree's branch
For she was ~ "incapable of her own distress"
She fell from the willow and drown in the brook
After all, she had to wear her necklace of Rue
Her regret, so amazingly misunderstood
Absolutely nothing left, for her to do........
At her funeral, the Queen sprinkles flowers
Upon her grave
"Sweets to the sweet"
Was all,
She could say.....
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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This was aesthetic in all its mystical glory a poem befitting praise such subtle compliments as I will give, this was perfection, you remained consistent in the idea her misunderstood love being forever obscured a 5 star not because I appreciate you as a person and generally want to show that in number but because tonight you have inspired me with a piece of poetry like no other, we're I such a crafter of words I'd be able to go more in depth with this one but I'll be brief, you found revenge (in misunderstandings) in poetry and as bitter sweet as it was it was beautiful to all onlookers regardless of topic...also when you get a chance I'd like you to check out a piece I wrote called "Midnight Misty", it was one I thought you would appreciate
Curious Onlooker
Dear ONLOOKER!!........what an amazing thing to do for a fellow writer.........I have inspired you?.........fantastic comment my friend.........Thank You so much for reading me.........and for actually caring about my attempts at this most wonderful art form!!..........I feel a symbiotic connection with you ..........your friend and admirer...........T xo
Great poem
5 star vote.
My dad just wrote a book about Ophelia called Ophelia Rising that you might enjoy.
here's a link to it. :)
http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/24295823-ophelia-rising
Wow Cactus!!..........so good to hear from you.........i'll definitely check it out my friend..........good lookin' out!!............glad you enjoyed it............thanx so much!!............smiles.........T xo
Tony, I read this one twice so far...
5* and fav...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Love you Sparrow!!...........it's a VERY big deal to me..........to hear a colleague say..........."Read this one Twice!!"..............Way Cool!!..............Love and Rockets!!.............T xo