Poem -
"ORANGE"
Orange, the world cremates
Evening's play
For life's
Seasons,
The weakening eye of day
For tomorrow will die
In sunset's crypt,
The cloudy canopy of hazy
Complexion,
Every spirit on earth
Sweetly recognizing
The inevitable
Crash
Of yellow's decay, into
Orange,
Where the ripened rinds
Fulfill acquiescence
And the twisted sun dresses
That Goddesses
Drape across suntanned shoulders
Wearing every virtue
Which glows red
Not unlike seeds sprouting apples
Whose orchard
In their rows of planned sustenance
Ultimately provide
The diapason
Of perfect rainbows
In melodious
Colors melting
Into the harmoniousness
Of sunset's voice
And, where the heart of it
Bleeds,
Orange...
Tony Taylor
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Hi Tony Ah well this piece made me cry
I so cant believe this coincidence or is it synchronicity
my mam passed Away Monday today the day, but the 14th
the date Wednesday her favorite color was orange with
her home many shade of orange I just bought a basket of
orange flowers to take to her grave
and the most profound thing is i have been playing around with
piece of my own called orange
your last lines make me think of my mother perfectly
and with your permission I would like to write them on the card with
her flowers
"The diapason
Of perfect rainbows
In melodious
Colors melting
Into the harmoniousness
Of sunset's voice
And, where the heart of it
Bleeds,
Orange.
..
A great write that I will never forget pinned
Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece
Love n hugs Debs xo
YAY!! DEBS!!!..... Amazing how synchronicity works!!......it's been a huge part of my life the past few years and I'm am MORE than pleased that this worked out for you this way...... honestly, there's no one else that I'd rather have make use of something I've penned...... you are the one person I could honestly say would recall my work if I were to pass away...... Please, make use of it in any way that may be of benefit!!......I am more than honored my friend........ and you have "once again" given me impetus to continue my work in this arena!!.........I LOVE how you Love my friend!!!...... and may your mother find peace in her newly found peace and rest from the difficulties of this most complicated and trying reality!!......... your friend and ever-admirer!!!.......T xo. ?
Tony Dear friend Thank you so much, so kind of you
I have written Your lines on an in memoriam
card, I have to say your words are in no way morose just truly beautiful
just how I think of my mother
This means A lot to me
Love n hugs Debs xo
wow Tony this is an exceptional piece. very well penned!
Hey Thanx DARKLY!!..... always appreciate your positive feedback my friend...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo. ?
You have a wonderful touch with the pen. At times your various creations leave me in awe.
Great poetry.
Take care my friend. :)
Thanx SIR WATERS!!...... it works both ways my friend ......I have looked to you for guidance since I have been here....... it was a great choice.......I thank you brother poet!!...... smiles......T xo. ?
What color is more profound than that of orange in a beautifully capture sunrise or sunset or at least for me definitely a more standout color. Always admire the way brother the way you make the smallest of nuances seem so sexy and provocative, as sundresses draped over goddesses shoulders. Awesome imagery throughout T. Love and peace.
So glad to see you back D!!.......thanx so much for this.......I agree with you there IS something special about the color orange........ so sorry about the birds bro!! .......talk football later?...... miss you man!!......... ttyl.........T xo. ?
Wow!!!...This is captivating Tony....I find a mysterious undertone to this write....Can't really place it..But I really enjoyed it
Lots of love
Cool!! Thanx sweet ROSE!!..... you're right .....there's a LOT gong on in this piece..... too much to go into detail here with.... suffice it to say...... the general idea was that I write a painting wrapped in hidden symbolism and innuendoes .......I had fun......thanx again girlfriend!!....hugs-n-high fives!!.......T xo. ?
Simply Awesome Tony.....really enjoyed the read !
Regards.....Mick.
Wow!! Thanx Mizzy!!.....very cool bro!......appreciate the positive ink bro!......smiles......T xo ?
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
A beautiful "Clockwork Orange". Our great gift to Cosmo, Tony Taylor, surpasses the gifted Stanley Kubrick with imagery not seen on a screen, but recorded in the chambers of our hearts and sequestered in our souls. His words bring us to the tip of our Universe. There we see "perfect rainbows". There we hear the diapason of a bursting sunset, and witness the majesty of a "Clockwork Orange".
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry xxx
Stunning comment!! ~Thanx SO very much my friend!!......I'm kind of a tough guy!?......but not after reading feedback like this.......you've really blown me completely away brother!......tears my friend!......astounded that you could actually find the pulse of this piece.......you're a blessing beyond compare......sitting here flabbergasted I can only think of one word......RAN!!!......much Love to you and yours brother poet!!........HUGZ!!.......T xo ?
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
A more stunning response that has also brought tears to my eyes. You are the harbinger of the words that I write. Your poetry takes me to far away places, where I lose myself in its beauty. Much love right back at you!!
Larry xxx
Orange is a beautiful color, unless it becomes president.
"Sorry Tone. Great poem, but I just couldn't help myself."