~ Orange ~
Orange, the world cremates
Evening's play
For life's
Seasons
Weakening the eye of day
'tis there
Tomorrow will die
In sunset's crypt
Crouched in the cloudy canopy
OfΒ its hazy
Complexion,
Every spirit upon the Earth
Sweetly recognizing
The inevitable crash
Of yellow's decay,
Into,
Orange,
Where the ripened rinds
Fulfill acquiescence
And the twisted sundress
That adorns
The goddesses
Drapes
Across suntanned shoulders
So lightly
So easily
Wearing every virtue
Which glows red,
Not unlike seeds sprouting apples
Whose orchard,
In its rows of planned sustenance
Ultimately provides
The diapason
Of perfect rainbows
In melodious
Colors,
Melting,
Deep,
Into the harmoniousness
Of sunset's voice,
WhereΒ the heart of it
Bleeds,
Orange......
Tony Taylor
Β * a work in progress (2nd edit)
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Definitely one of my best poems..... or at least my favorites!!........thanx Sweetheart......I can always count on you for support and insight!!...... Love you...... Kisses!!.......T xo ??β₯β₯β₯β₯β₯
Wow, fantastic post-Tony.
YAY!!!..... thank you DARKLY!!!.....I was disappointed that no one got to see the second edit of this piece.....SO HAPPY you found your way here....... tons of Love and Kisses heading your way my friend!...... hugs-n-smiles!!.....thanx again......... Tony.Β Β ????β₯β₯β₯β₯???β³β³β³
Outstanding, excellently penned, a mastery of words I do admire
thank you dear poet friend!!...... short & sweet!!..... works for me!...... smiles...... to my ??β₯β₯β³β³
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
Your brilliant words sink deeply into my Soul, inspiring this reply.
The Sky's silent singing sunset
Erupts in a concordium of color
Each one, a metaphor of life
The culmination of it's brilliance
"Orange"
The core of it's very soul
Love you Bro,
Larry xxx
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" ..A concordium of color.."..... only you my dear poet brother!!.....ONLY you!!......thanx SO much for this gorgeous comment!!..... hope all is well with you!!...... Hugs-n-Smiles!!.....T xo ???β₯β₯
"ONLY you" too!
My brilliant Guru.
Hugs and Love,
Larry xxx
Just one word dear Tony... BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!! Love, Happy Jack!!!Β ?????
Thank you Captain JACK!!....... much appreciated!!...... Love to you and yours!!.......T xo ???β₯?
Your so gifted! Throughouly enjoyed every moment.
-Rachel xΒ
Thanx So much for reading RACHEL!!...... I'm so glad you enjoyed it!... heading to your age now to see what you've been up to!!!...... Glide on Love!!.....T xo ??β₯
Breath taking colors described in black and white. True artistry my friend, a great mastery of the language. To be read and reread.Tony were I a wearer of hats I would tip it to you, but a tug of the forelock will have to do. Well done sire, well done indeed.
John
WOW WOW WOW !!!! SO wonderfull even greater then masterpiece
I think I am in love with your poetry