Poem -
~ ORANGE ~
Orange, the world cremates
Evening's play
For life's
Seasons
The weakening eye of day
For tomorrow will die
In sunset's crypt,
The cloudy canopy of hazy
Complexion
Every spirit upon the earth
Sweetly recognizing
The inevitable
Crash
Of yellow's decay into
Orange,
Where the ripened rinds
Fulfill acquiescence
And the twisted
Sundress
That Goddess's
Drape
Across suntanned shoulders
So easily
Wearing every virtue
Which glows red
Not unlike seeds sprouting apples
Whose orchard
In its rows of planned sustenance
Ultimately provides
The diapason
Of perfect rainbows
In melodious colors
Melting,
Into the harmoniousness
Of sunset's voice,
And where the heart of it
Bleeds,
Orange....
Tony Taylor
*final edit
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Comments
Wow, mesmerisingly beautifulπβ¨
YAY!!..... so glad you liked it DREAMER!!.......thanx for commenting dear poet sister!!....... Peace n Stuff!!......T xo π§β΄β€
Hello Tony...
Who doesn't feel the need to straighten out a twisted Sundress?
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Fantastic write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs and Smiles!
Love and Rockets!
Feathers
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LOL!! I Love You FEATHERS!!..... hey, what can I say...... you're a trip girlfriend.... with a seriously 'way cool' way of looking at this reality!!.......thanx for making me smile........ hugs n more smiles!!.....T xo
Tony I love this dark nature write. Pinned cause I can!Β lol
LOL!!... thank you DARKLY!!......" Because you can!!"..... Love it!!......thanx so much just for being groovy girlfriend!!...... hugs N smiles!!........T xo π§β΄β€
Tony always a great poem
Thanx GREG!!.... so cool that you remember the first version of this!!........ Yay!!....... stay groovy brother!!........ awesome!!........T xo π§β΄β€
Hey T!Β Such pretty imagery and originality in how you present "orange" in its vibrancy....I love the picture you chose!Β Perfect!Β I always think that orange is like my least favorite color, but I am wrong when it is portrayed like this...such awesome descriptions....a necessary color in life with depth and emotional integrity like you brought alive!Β Great rewrite.Β xo Love, Hugs, n Kisses xo
Thanx C!!.....Yeah!!.....I did get lucky in finding this picture..... it works perfectly!!........ you're the grooviest!!...... hugs N Kisses!!.......T xo π§β΄β€β€β€β€π
Thanx for the stars SirMcGOWAN......appreciate your taking the time to read!!....... smiles........T xo
Thanx for reading JG!!..... smiles.......T xo
Thanx for taking the time GEORGIA!!...... it's very much appreciated!!...... smiles........T xo
Thanx for the Stars SYD!!...pretty sure you read the Original version!!........ stay groovy brother!!.... Peace N Stuff!!.......T xo π§β΄β€
yeah π! Groovy brotherΒ
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