~ ORANGE ~
Orange, the world cremates
Evening's play
Within life's
Seasons
Weakening the eye of day
For tomorrow will die
In sunset's crypt
That cloudy canopy of hazy
Complexion
With every soul upon the earth
Slowly recognizing
The inevitable
Crash
Of yellow's decay
Into
Orange
Where ripened rinds
Fulfill acquiescence
And the twisted sundress
That goddesses
Drape
Across suntanned shoulders
So easily
Displaying every virtue
In a blushed red
Not unlike seeds sprouting apples
Whose orchard
In its rows of planned sustenance
Ultimately provides
A diapason
Emanating from rainbows
In melodious colors
Melting
Into the harmonious sound
Of sunset's voice
And where the heart of it
Bleeds,
Orange...
Tony Taylor
* still tinkering with this
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cool write Linda
Thank you LINDA!!......smiles....T xo : )
Wowsers Tony what an epic poem my friend. As soon as I read “Orange, the world cremates
Evening's play”
I just knew I was in for a most tantalising visually stimulating piece of poetry. You did not disappoint. The use of the sunset here, painting the canvas of earths ever changing stages. Weaving nature’s power, that we humans are the audience to such greatness. The sensation of that deep blood red orange glow consumes the reader beautifully. I could see the end of an era through the wondrous glow of a bedding sun. Just so pretty in the minds eye. Your ability to write through nature is simply stunning. I am so happy to pin this one my friend. A gorgeous piece of writing that feeds the mind and lulls the imagination into that warm glow
All the best
Gwen x
Ah Hell G!!.....there is too much to say...gonna have to message you privately!! But suffice it to say.....I am humbled and MOST grateful for your kind words!!.......Love to you and yours!!.....smiles!.....T xo : )
WOW Tony what
a great poem
another masterpice
wonderful poem
Thanx tons GREG!!....you're the man!!....fist bump!!......T xo ; )
This is a great visual Tony! I like where you going with your art. I applaud you.
Sincerely
Greg
Thank You kindly!! G!!
Aw Tony I've got to agree with everything said here...you have an ability to take the reader on a spiritual ride with your words ...always always so eloquently written..stunning x
Coming from you......WOW!! YAY!! HURRAY!!......smiles!!....you're pretty darn cool dear lady!!......thanx for this!!.....smiles.....T xo ; )
Good write...peace
Thanx LORRIS!!.........for taking the time!!......be cool!!......T xo : )
I wanna know how you crafted such a bloody good poem with only Orange in/as the title ... I'm not complaining, I am in awe .. Nothing rhymes with it yet you have created a little masterpiece that takes your reader on a cosmic journey of exploration & imagination teasing discovery ... breathtakingly beautiful & exquisitely complex .. Go on, tell me how ya do it ........................... N :)
Well first ~ I mix some eye of Newt with some readily available alchemical agent....then pray to the heavens that my pencil doesn't break.....smiles.....I don't know brother......how is it that you consistently impress, swoon, convey love, and add such "Cool Stuff" to the entirety of this site!!??.....See!!.....not an easy question to answer.......I Love your brain my friend......keep sharing.....it's a beautiful site to behold!!.....sending lots of love to you and yours!! ........Peace Out!!......T xo : )
............... you got me smiling here too brother Tony :)
Dense deep creation Tony! ✍️👍🏼
Dense!!??....wow!!....VERY cool!!....thanx brother!!.......Later Tater!!......T xo : )
In case of confusion, I meant dense with meaning….
Understood my friend......I guess mine was just a poor attempt at sarcasm!!......stay groovy brother!!......Out......T xo : )