Original Betrayal

wonderful write. It's so great to be reading again

Nice write Jim…

Awsome poem Jim

Nice write Jim ⚘⚘

Strong hard-hitting poem against someone who is abusive. Kudos for the fine way you vented it out smoothly.!

Plz  pleez request u to read and comment my newest poem too.

Jim in a nutshell...Wow!
Boy oh boy that is some poem you have written here and your choice of image adds to it.
Very ethereal and darkly haunting a real Sorcerer's Apprentice feel to it and pervades throughout.
Loved it!
A real sonnet of darkness and impending doom feel about it.
Loved it!
Have a good one and day also Jim and this so so poet wishes you well and thanks you my friend.

Wowsers Jim, this holds such an impact in its intent. Ending with such a line ! “Seeing no light; in dead eyes” gosh the sense of someone being lost to the darkness is evidenced perfectly here. Splendid imagery throughout this power tanked write 👏 👌

All the very best 
Your friend
Gwen x 

Cunningly spoken , about this modern age. 
Very well put. 
Hats off friend. 

Having read through these words before today & on several occasions, I can appreciate just how applicable those tags you applied to it are .. I can also see just how timely & of the moment your words are write now too Sir Jim .. and to Putin as clearly & succinctly as I am able without risk of being taken out by some hitman, I applaud both you & your pen ...........  Neville