~ ORIGINAL LIGHT ~
Oh heart, of my own molded perceptions
I beg of thee, allow my true love its light
To bleed through all my crumbled conceptions
And to land, upon the roots of my original light
That I might reignite the flames of being a child...
Oh soul, of my innocence, might I rekindle the divine
The essence of my pre-birth, recollections, and thoughts
Where, when anything passing through my minds eye
In retrospect, was always there, as that which was sought
And taught, of that, which was preordained plot...
Oh beatific light, of impeccable presumption
How might I become that which I'm sure impossible
To take the Two Towers, to control the consumption
Of the insanity that science fiction makes plausible
With, the overall ideas, that make all of it possible...
Oh heart, of my most intuitive perceptions
I have come to know, through my insatiable lust for life
That childhood's truth, leaves a profound impression
Upon adulthood's choices, struggles, and strife
And when the enigmatic, is comprehended and applied
It brings, a magnificent bloom, to one's original light...
Tony Taylor
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Indeed good man, in all your genius wordings the light of this child, now a light of the path to a grown man.
So beautifully written!!! All stars
Best Wishes, Nancy
Thank you MISS NANCY!!......it is so good to hear from you.....I will to your pages to see what you've been up to lately....thanx again dear poet sister!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
" The childhood's truth leaves a profound impression......."
One of your masterpieces Tony. I remember you also wrote something about paranormal that inspired me to write mine, ' The Vortex' ....
You're like an old wine that gets better with age lol.
LOL!!.....I don't think anyone has ever made that comparison before but I like it LEAH!!......Yeah, I'd say at least 60% of all of my poetry is based in the paranormal.....it is SO relevant these days...I even wrote a blog on it for several years.......So glad to hear it inspired a poem from you.....I'll have to read "The Vortex" for myself!!.......thanx so much for sharing your thoughts and impressions dear poet sister......smiles......T xo : )
Sir Tony.
This is absolutely beautiful.
I felt like I was read king David's book Psalms.
Just filled with heartfelt emotion.
I truly enjoyed my cyber friend.
YAY!!....what a very kind comment Sir BARKER!!.....and it is VERY much appreciated....but that comparison is a little out of my league (smiles)....if you know what I mean!? (more smiles)......thank you for the thought dear poet brother!!....and.....Glide On Love!!......T xo : )
A fine poem my friend, it certainly appears to have got the lot and clearly both stands out and shines .......................... :) Neville
Thank you NEVILLE!!.......we do what we can!!......I appreciate your kind impressions!!.......Lots of Love to you and yours!!......T xo : )
You are most welcome Mr. T :)
Hi Tony,
'The child is the father of the man.'
Great perception Tony.
Love Terry.
xoxo :)
Thanx TERRY!!......It took three edits to finally get that one right!!.....you know what they say!!......"Writing is re-writing!!".......thanx again my friend!!.......Later.......T xo : )
Wow wow wow!!!!!Tony Man you’re such a great writer
many of us would like to write like you
this poem is excellent so well done
A masterpiece always your poems are all
Great
While I appreciate the enthusiastic comment and kindness of your words....the truth is.....that this piece was just good 'ol Hard Work......been struggling with this one for a year......finally got it where I want it though.....thanx so much for your stellar support of my work GREG!!.....you're a kind soul.......Lots of Love to you and yours!!.....smiles....T xo : )
Wow A year to ride it it’s amazing
All Great Poems always take time
Beautifully written Tony.
Thanx tons JP!!.......smiles....T xo : )
Another beautiful and soul searching write Tony...a great sense of peace and calm in this I found...a lovely work.my friend x
Thank you MARION!!......sometimes stuff just has to come out.....even though it may be a challenge to get it down on paper!!.....I ALWAYS look forward to your impressions dear poet sister!!......Hugs n Smiles!!......T xo : )
Hi Tony... I found this a soul searching and interesting poem. If only we all embraced our inner child and allowed ourselves to be "wonderfied" more often x
Hello Tony,
I felt that realisation when we wake up to the genius which resides within innocent eyes. The yearning to rekindle and tap back into old routes, from even our pre-birth existence on this here earth. There is a deep seeded introspective enlightenment that illuminates the readers own existence. Forcing them to take stock. A truly cleverly penned poem. Once again the bar has been set at a breathtaking height. Your pen is mighty and your mind makes for insightful reading
Your delighted to know you friend
Gwen x