Poem -
Our Anniversary
Our anniversary; another year to reminisce,
Uplifting each other in a wonderful life of bliss!
Thankful for your patience and thoughtful caring ways!
That helped our lives intertwine all these precious days.
You are my friend; my helpmate, my glorious queen!
I'd be lost without you, ever in between.
Say you'll never leave me, renewing vows of love,
Emulating starlight; shining up above.
With Heavenly Father our ultimate goal,
He brings us together; our life, heart and soul.
Our marriage is an example; what true love can be!
A light on a candle stick; through all eternity.
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Comments
AΒ LOVELY Anniversary tribute write....the kind of poem that inspires and humbles!!.......Truly honest and compelling dear poet brother!!......I REALLY like some of power you've created within these phrases!!......VERY well done JIM!!......ALL STARS!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xoΒ : )
Thank you much Tony, it is heart felt. Your comments help me understand this endeavor! Thank you. The triangle of Heavenly Father at the top ,my wife and I making the two bottom corners progressing towards Heavenly Father, we believe brings us together, the way we grow and grow together is having the same goals.
Wow what a charming sentimental poem to your wife, it's great when poets appreciate their wives, I don't see enough of that these days. Kudos for this awesome well rhymed poem and the rhyming doesn't distract it adds to it's Β classical beauty.Β
Thank you much for your kind words, we don't see enough kindness these days either! I like to rhyme! andΒ like your poems as well !Β Thank you for taking the time to read and comment !
A beautiful write Jim...full of love and appreciation...rare these days, sadly...??
Thank YOU! and why I appreciate your words the more!
Wow, I really like this. GREAT write.
Thank You for reading it and your words!
I wrote this to my wife for our twentieth anniversary, I wanted it to be special like she is ! I entered it on our special day of October 7th. A thank you to all the wonderful people whom commented!
That means a lot coming from you! I have seen your talent and appreciate your comments !
such a heartfelt write, a joy to read such a talented poet!
I think you've got me beat on that talent thing, but I'm learning.Thank you for your kind words!
Congratulations!
Thank You!
Truly beautiful words, would make any queen feel very special and loved!Β
Thank You Ashley! all people should be made to feel special and loved, especially your spouse!..........Jim