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Our Proposal

Our Proposal

You said “What about it”

I said “What about what”

“Marriage and all that”

I didn’t look up in case you weren’t sincere

Because you are everything I hold dear

“Well” you said

I lifted my head

We looked at each other

Our smiles you couldn’t smother

I don’t think either of us actually ever did propose

Things just happened I suppose

It was just decided there and then

Now we’ve chose the place and when

Being a recession

We just had a session

The ring has to wait

More important that we get our date

Deposits are paid on music and venue

Were still deciding on the menu

I know a surprise you’ll spring

When I do get that ring

We’re both over forty

And oh so flirty

Wouldn’t it be such a laugh

To not have to pay for a photograph

Just a reminder for anyone who’s lonely

He or she is out there looking for you only

We’ve found love, we fit like a glove

So remember it’s never to late to meet your soul mate

Ray loads of hugs ‘n kisses

Can’t wait to be your missus

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BLOSSOM

Ah Susan, really liked the style in which you wrote this! Great structure and flow. Such a wonderful sentiment and foundation for a life together.  Sincerity to the last Susan, loved it! .  A vote and nom from me:)

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Susan O'Reilly

Hi Rachel this is my first attempt at poetry as an adult and won the photographer for my wedding and unfortunately I haven't stopped writing since delighted you liked this one thanks x

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BLOSSOM

Ha ha, it becomes a bit of a curse doesn't it hun lol!!  What a lovely story, and what a great prize!  Nice work Susan :)

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Tracy Timothy

i absolutely loved that susan x there,s hope for me yet lol!  i loved the scene ya set made me smile

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Anthony Lane

Very nice and somewhat the same story for me at 32. Been with her every day after and the love just keeps getting stronger! Good job, Anthony 

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