Our Ticking Souls
Inspired by Flower Girl's(Join Me)
Bright blue window
Eyes,
Shallow sight
Grew
More over the years of particularÂ
Becoming x-ray vision
Seen through, players of life,
But not youÂ
My lovely of substance,
A stare into you
Reflects you staring into me
Toning down to percieve
Glimpses of discern,
As I espy everything in works about she
Which really works for melting me.
.........Let us be in my mind of physical touch
Floating through, quickening body feelings
Entangled souls, mating for eternity,
And to this day
I give in
To your white hot flesh
Peering at our ticking souls
Desire sodden, heavy handed
Wanting to reach out
Still it's beating heartÂ
Hearts meant, only for each other's hands
To hold foreverÂ
Never forgetting the feel
Or growing tired
Of it's embrace.
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Thank you so much C, I actually put in comments of FGs write how inspired I was and wrote a few lines in the comments that appear in my poem. I thought that inspiration just bared this write and naturally I attributed it. Iam enjoying brightening things up from all these dark writes and I love your appreciation. Tons of love and hugs back to you.
Hey D!!........this is definitely an example of your extraordinary ability to wield words......... compare this to the first few writes you did here........... you have grown into one of the best writers on COSMO........ and you've done it so quickly..........I think you're just "A Natural"........... with the ability to take your writing to great and noble heights......... we'll be able to say "We knew you when!" ............if you keep it up........ there's no telling how far you can go..........I also think you'll be leaving COSMO because your skills will take you elsewhere......... like serious prose........... Hell, what do I know....... I'm just guessing because you've grown immeasurably!!.......... well done brother!!............ more power to you!!.........T xo
Wow man that is awesome and definitely made my day. As of best writers coming from you its great to hear but your too kind I would like to believe that I can write with the best of them if we as writers should ever deem so. I have come a long way and my roads do lead away from cosmo but yet they seem to swerve back as I can never forget where I came from. Maybe one day I Â will do something the world will recognize me for that would be an honor but I don't see the profit in benefiting for fortune from something I love to do that's free, maybe when I was 14 I was about that grand delusion but what I benefit from is the joy of passion the inspiration I get and give as well as the many friends and people I come across, that to me is rewarding. So appreciate this compliment im all smiles for many moments to come, love you brother.