Poem -
Pain and fever.
Pain and fever,
Truly is a pain ,
my mind So tired,
everything a strain,
Oh i wish my body
would heal faster,
My house is starting,
To display disaster,
Pain and fever,
your no friend of mine,
Just an aching body,
Do you bind,
Oh detest
Not being blind,
The cleanup hours,
Never kind,
The only thing working,
Is my mind,
Pain and fever,
Truly is a pain,
Give my body,
Strength again.
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Comments
Hey Nardine........the rhythm in this is perfect........makes for a dream of a read sis.........could feel the struggle with the pain, the repetition of the word makes the whole thing work.........loved this!!!........well done sister girl!............smiles.........T xx
Thank you my darling brother, i wish it was just a dream, it's more so like a bad one walking hehe, loves me that much it doesn't want to leave lol, day three now of living nightmare, but someone has to write about it, best be the suffering hand, don't wish this on anyone:( love to you always little bro, nardine xoxo
Dear Poetess Nardine,
Make pain a gain for poetry writing, When there is pain, poetry flows in. Take my brother Tony's case, He became the best POET of these days, even while he is pain with his leg.
Good write, Thanks for sharing, My applause, My love,
Love & Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dear friend sir Williamsji, pain is off the essence, something I've know a long time, indeed the master of ink, love to you dear friend, nardine xoxo
wow that is really good. It speaks to me
Thank you Renee, :) luckily I'm feeling more human today, starting to get things tidied up haha, love to you sweetie, nardine xoxo
ANYTIME BEST FRIEND!!!!! LOVE YOU AND YOUR POETRY. :)
Your adorable Renee, love you xoxo
awe tank chu :3 hehe
Sweetie hope you are fine now.Get well soon.Lovely write as usual.
Thanks heaps Piusha, I'm nearly mended, love to you sweetheart, nardine xoxo