Poem -
pain in my bottle
Drinking whiskey watching the moon...
Sitting out side all alone
To drunk I don't know what I'm doing
Pour another shot, start to cry
Wishing you would leave with this bottle
Got so depressed without you
I started writing poems
Can't do nothing about it
Started questioning life about it
They say time or getting under someone
Gets rid of it
But time feels like forever
Underneath isn't no better
SO FUCK THIS LIFE IF YOUR NOT IN IT...
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Hi Poetess Vanessa,
In life, many situations may come up, failirues, defeat, success, joy, your verse is good in its theme, thanks for sharing, my applause,my vote
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
This life is a shit if you do not are in it!
Shared pain is much better, but never the best solution is to share the pain with a bottle, each person is free to decide for his life, but alcohol when it is essential to try to bring a pain ends up becoming a nightmare.
A few sips of whiskey under the Moonlight serve fuel the imagination to compose a poem, but getting drunk to forget pain seems to me a mistake that you pay very expensive.
I suppose it's fiction, hahahahahaha, in the mind of a poet never know when what they think and write is real or fiction.
A greeting.
Lucas it was a metaphor with my pain in the bottle but being honest has happened once or twice that I have sat there drank and thought about him
And thank u WILLIAMSJI
Perfection I call this!
Thanks morris :)
Totally know that feeling beautiful girl, been there more than once myself
Nicely Penned, much love to you sweetie, nardine xox
Thank u both nardine and clienton for the comments :)
Hello Vanessa...
Feeling the pain!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Sparrowsong i appreciate it thanks