PAIN OF THE HEART
Dream and wish for this is bliss
Just for one deep kiss
Trust has been the defence
Between me and joy was a fence
I look up to the sky and climb with another try
mysterious eyes look into my soul
Connect to make me whole
Afraid to fear then shed a tear
Hold me tight under the starry night
Isit fight or flight
Do you know what is right
I love to love through and through
You are worth it true is true
but i am not good enough for you
so I sit all alone being weighed down by a heavy stone
Your ignorance give me no tolerance
Just speak to me just tell me you want to be free
All i want is to be yours
it is a tough cause but there must be a deeper purpose
not just on the surface , give it a try please i plead
i want to stop this cry
never again will i open up
before i do i must stop
love is only pain and for the insane
i build my wall brick by brick very tall
never again in love shall i fall
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i have been hurt many times but i am starting to feel that there is something wrong with me . My late bf fought for me but he cheated which never made sense. i am loyal and caring but i am never appreciated for that but only looks i am tired of never being seen as more and tired of being a fool. i just want a God fearing man who understands my weirdness who can connect with me on a deeper level who can understand beauty and spirituality as well as imagination. I will never find a man in this age. I will die alone but with less pain
I feel your pain, Geolene. And no, there is nothing wrong with you. When Life is proving difficult, it means God wants you to turn away from the outside world and turn inwards. Meditate.
thank you sweet human that helps a lot you are the best . you are right may God bless you how are you
no theres nothing wrong with you at all
I have been hurt many time myslfe
I admire the courage it took to be this open , and pray you have your wish for the new year for a love that's true.🌺
thank you I appreciate what you said and that quote is on point I really appreciate your words. love is life experience and lesson. if we didn't get hurt or struggle financially or in any way , life would be dull, but sometimes we all need a break and just sit back and be happy , some day we will all have that reward I pray. Thank you for inspiring me , in fact all of you wonderful artists inspire me and I love it here because this is how humans should be , kind , bring each other up, you all are great. I would never have opened up if I knew I would have been scolded and made fun of. I have nobody to talk to , but I want you to see me , take a look and get to know me before you see more of my work or become my friends.
I could feel your pain in every line and I too have felt pain from love.
It is of loss and of being in love with the wrong person and not realizing it
until it was way too late.. How could I have made such a mistake? Well love is never wrong.. it is just what it is love.. it is up to us to handle such a strong
emotion.. Unconditional love is the one that releases all judgment and all
control and expectation.. if I had just known that then...
If they do not love us unconditionally and for who we are.. then they are not the right one.. and that is the truth.. beautiful poem.. you are so open and authentic .. in your writing.
blessings
violet
thank you my dear you are amazing human much love xx
I’m enjoying reading your poem.
I can hear the music in the rhyme.
Favorite stanza:
I love to love through and through
You are worth it true is true
The repeating words make these two lines stand out for me.
Thanks for sharing.
Good work
thanks my lovely dear may God bless you you are incredible
Congratulations on your contest win!
Geolene, So sorry for your pain. Love really hurts sometimes but don't give up. Wonderfully written poem. I wanted to say congrats. Terry Kay
thank you so much i appreciate it you area wonderful human may God bless you :)
beautiful sad write