Poem -

Paradise

When the soldiers came marching
walking down the road
my heart will be with them
and the tears from where they had to go
some will be walking,
and some will stroll along,
some of our brave men are forever gone
The tears I cry are for you
my heart is in your hands
for the assignment was really very grand,
In the dawn of day
when the tally is tolled
into Paradise some of our heroes go.

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Good write, Thanks for sharing, I liked the below lines

The tears I cry are for you
my heart is in your hands
for the assignment was really very grand,
In the dawn of day
when the tally is tolled
into Paradise some of our heroes go.

Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Shannon O'donnell

Dear WILLIAMSJI MAVELI,

 Thank you for your comment about my poem I feel our men keep us free and God's reward is instore for them if we should fall short. I hope I do good in the contest too, thank you again.

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Shannon O'donnell

Our hearts will always be with our men and woman in the service.

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