Poem - 12 May 2015, 15:32 Paradox Vikki Blacke Struggle for your Two-faced heart She who has the Most scars wins But the scores are Secret and Forbidden when Your forked tongue Splits All your lies become Paradoxal truths Like 0 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 425 Rating: Total votes: 2 Poetry Genre: Romance Freestyle Melodrama 4 comments
Christopher Correia12 May 2015, 15:46 Vikke, your articulation is mesmerizing in this write, you speak of quite the dilemma as well, terrific wordplay and poetic construction....very interesting read, I like your style....cheers Reply
Vikki Blacke12 May 2015, 17:26 Thank you. I love good imagery and I try to implement it where I can.... when I can manage not too be overly verbiose and ruin the effect Reply
Tony Taylor12 May 2015, 18:51 Hey Vikki Blacke!!..........I agree with Chris, VERY compelling and succinctly delivered...........well done friend.............smiles..........T xo Reply
Vikki Blacke13 May 2015, 14:29 Thank you!!! :) I'm happy to find that my work is enjoyable to others.I hope my future efforts don't disappoint! Reply
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Vikke, your articulation is mesmerizing in this write, you speak of quite the dilemma as well, terrific wordplay and poetic construction....very interesting read, I like your style....cheers
Thank you. I love good imagery and I try to implement it where I can.... when I can manage not too be overly verbiose and ruin the effect
Hey Vikki Blacke!!..........I agree with Chris, VERY compelling and succinctly delivered...........well done friend.............smiles..........T xo
Thank you!!! :) I'm happy to find that my work is enjoyable to others.I hope my future efforts don't disappoint!Â