Poem -

Part of A Whole That Needs Mending

author
Neville

There is part of a whole
that needs 
to be mended and crying
out for attention ..
Yet while I still struggle
to forgive you
for dying like that ..
I doubt, no matter how
hard I might try ..
I won’t find a patch that’s
anywhere near big enough ..

 

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Total votes: 2
Tags: 
Lonely Longing Loss Lost Love
Poetry Genre: 
Freestyle
Topic: 
Reality
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Fairy Tales

Love hurts more than pain sometimes. Great Poetry.

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author
Neville

You are absolutely right Jacques .. someone ought to write a song or a poem about it .. Thanks a million for planting a few seeds .. Neville 

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