Partner In Crime

Like 7 Pin it 1Long deserving
Of overdue credit
In these passages of rhyme
She's never tried to change me
Alter or rearrange me
In so many ways she's saved me...
My silent partner in crime...
She puts up with my madness
Loves me when I'm sane
I was a wilted flower
Forgotten on the window pane
Somehow she has the power
To lift my face from dour
I'm grateful for every hour
That her sweetness
Compliments my sour...
I'm the desert, she's the rain...She's uniquely crafted carpentry
When she could be flat pack
Like most the rest
I'm glad she's not normal
'Cos normality
I do detest
She keeps my blood flowing
By never guessing
Always knowing...She's the beating in my chest...
A strong willed woman
Always glowing
Never dull
With kindness
Always showing
Deserving of a crown
For putting up with me
A halo she adorns
Certainly no pushover...She's the rose, to my thorns...
She's the mother to my children
A counterbalance
To my unstable life
I'm one lucky man
To have her as my wife
I was lost in the darkness
Until she emitted light...I am death, she is life...
Chemical kisses
Watching the sunrise
Convinced me she's the one
Now thirteen years have passed
Who says good things
Aren't meant to last?
From then on I was blessed
Always a welcome invader
In my consciousness
Privileged to have her at my side
She is better than the best...I am the electric, she's the kool aid acid test...
As If perfection had a personality
She makes my dreams reality
I know I'm not alone
A masterpiece of speciality
Carved out of
Flesh
Skin
And bone...I will be forever grateful...
That she made her heart my home...

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Comments
This is truly BEAUTIFUL brother!!....... the lotic flow to this is immaculate and contributes greatly to the Love & appreciation of that Love so well conveyed!!...... stellar formatting is the icing dear brother poet!!.......ALL STARS!!...... well done!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo
Cheers Tony, glad you enjoyed. This is by far the longest it has ever taken me to write a poem. As you know, love and romance isn't my thing. This will be a one off, this is as romantic as I'll ever get so I've told my long suffering wife to savour it lol. I'm glad you picked up on the formatting, it had my head done in trying to get it right.
Thanks again for your feedback. Much appreciated - Syd xo
Aww mate this is it this right here is a masterpeice brillantly crafted & written to perfection 10/10 from me my friend ???? ??
Cheers James, such a lovely kind comment. So glad you enjoyed.
Take care - Syd ?
A great piece of work
Thank you Kieran, glad you enjoyed
- Syd
I love this poem Syd, well done, a great tribute to a most special person.
Thank you Gerard. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading and leaving feedback.
Much appreciated - Syd
Love it well sculptured and written. A pleasure to read.
Thank you Fauxcroft, glad you enjoyed. I appreciate the feedback - Syd
OMG, Syd, this is beautiful! Just such a lovely devotion to the one you love, put in a very clever form. Well done bro! Xx
Thank you Lucy, and thanks for the pin also. Glad you enjoyed - Syd xo