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Perfect Moment

Perfect Moment

"We're entering a new world. It's vast and it's exciting", you say to me, your shaded furls primed, hanging in painite prayer.

The breadth of your bones pleading, murmuring secrets with each rustling brush of reticence.

How this low light generously blankets fear and this tepid zephyr sighs away little torments of yesterday.

A quiet lake photograph of perfection that can only survive one swirling current—a flirtation of cool and heat together.

It stays forever in a stopped watch case but rolls dense down the extrinsic ravine—
"Why can't it always be warm like this?"

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Neville

This is either magnificent, or I'm reading it all wrong & although I'm not perfect, or for that matter, always write, I am hardly ever wrong when it comes to certain somethings and poetry .. NevilleĀ 

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Brittany S.

I believe it Neville šŸ’œĀ 
And thank you very much. I'm glad it meant something to you and that you felt something magnificent ā˜ŗļø I'm pretty sure that means you read it all right

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