Perfected Body
dedicated to.......Lisa
Little Pluto; no longer a planet; wears his heart on his sleeve!
A cold witness; Neptune; the ice giant will never grieve.
Beside itself; Uranus; so far out has always been blue!
It; along with mighty Saturn; with their rings always spin true!
Jupiter, protector! smashing worlds into asteroid belt!
Fervent Mars! world at war; our system heart; never to melt!
Earth our home; unique water planet; in the Goldy locks zone!
Venus hides in a cloud; pretending to never have been known!
Mercury, messenger so close to the sun! speeds on its way!
Sun; we cherish and follow forever; turns night into day!
System organized so that we might have a mortal trial!
Return to Father with a perfected body after awhile!
All spin denoting the forever; or one eternal round!
We must learn to live together; or separate we'll be found!
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awsome poemJimย
great poem
thank you my awesome friend!
Thatโs a twist of faithย
my friendย
I mean fateย
humanityย
is Godlinessย
well done ladย
hey Charles thank you for stopping by! and yes it is partly from my faith! all the best!
Oh thank you Jim for this stellar ink
glad you liked it and love that play on words!
Bring back Pluto as a planet.
totally concur Christopher! thank you for your support!
Oh this is awesome!! I love it!! Pinned!
Hi Pratibha! you're awesome! thanks bunches!
Fabulous write Jim...I adore anything to do with the planets x
that would be me as well Marion! love that astronomy! thank you!
A captivating stellar write on display and a befitting wonderful dedication for Lisa.
And also a great journey for everyone to read and experience.
And are you a Kubrick/Star Child/2001 fan.
A superb write Jim and thanks for sharing.
fun stuff Shaun! love to dabble in and enjoy science fiction and science fact!..thank you Shaun!
Jim what can I say but thank in more ways than one for what you have done.
I just read your recent message and will reply and was enthralled at what you have said.
It again speaks volumes to your good character and goes beyond mere words, for there is so much between the lines written that reaches out.
Thank you Jim and live a long life my gracious friend
hey Shaun, I just hope it is credible enough to investigate sincerely! thank you!
This is so outa this wordly my friend .. I am mightily impressed .. You coulda knocked me down with a meteowrite .. enjoyed to the hilt sir & no kidding ..ย
Just need to ask, did you pen this off the top of ya head, or did ya planet ................................................................................................................ Neville
:)
Just pondering and it came along Neville! love that planet idea! lol!
No worries, sometimes it takes a while for my particles to pop too Jim .. Oh' n Happy Easter :)ย
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thank you bunches Liliana!
Wonderful ink Jim. I was gutted when they demoted Pluto. I love where you took the reader here. A beautiful message conveyed through the majestic wonderment of our solar system. You have a beautiful soul xย
Gwen, beauty is in the eye of your gracious words!
thank you Shelley- anne!
thank you Shelley anne!
thank you bunches Rodeoslurppy!