Poem -
Pieces Of Me
Like 2 Pin it 0Pieces of memories
Drifting apart
Consciousness dissipates
Time and matter....
Onto the canvas
My logic splattersCreates abstract art
With deep patterns and whirls
Colours of violet
Meet brushtrokes of violence....Colours then merge in unison
Darkness of anger
Shades of death
Loss & confusionPaint continues to run
As time lumbers on
The greyness of the situation
Emotions of grief unfurlThe centre piece is a shellfish
That weeps...
A clam grieves the loss
Of it's Pearl
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Dear poet brother SYD!
One of the most difficult things a poet can undertake is to paint surrealism with words..... and perhaps I'm stepping outside the bounds of assumption here but it seems to me you're making an effort at the untypical here ~
~ "Time and matter.....
onto the canvass
my logic splatters.."
I always have enjoyed your forays into the unusual.... this is no exception..... and I apologize if I'm off base here....... but I can only see good things on the horizon for you my friend!!......ALL STARS!!.... well done dear brother poet!!....... LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?✴❤
Hi Tony, my apologies for the late reply. You're not off base, I was trying my hand at something a bit different. Thanks for stopping by my page and leaving feed back. Much appreciated as always.
Take care. Love & rockets also - Syd xo